That's a great drawing of your girlfriend, but you should emphasize the nose a bit more.
你的女友这张画像很漂亮,但你应该把她的鼻子再勾画一下。
In the new country he became absorbed in making a new life for the two of us, so that he gradually ceased to grieve.
在这个新的国家里,父亲专心致志地为我们俩开创一种新的生活,慢慢地不伤心了。